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Cold email personalisation

Hyper writes each buyer an email they recognise from the first line.

Hyper writes each buyer an email about a change happening in their own business, and sends that email to the person in the business who has to deal with the change. Your team writes none of the emails and does none of the research.

Run the playbook

01

Write the account connection

Hyper names the change in the buyer's business, then says what the change costs that buyer in practice. A congratulations line about a funding round gives the buyer nothing to reply to.

  • Name the event
  • Name the consequence
  • Check the buyer owns the consequence
02

Choose one useful claim

Each email makes one claim about what your company does for a business in that position. Hyper leaves out every promise the research cannot stand behind.

  • State the outcome
  • Remove unsupported certainty
  • Remove secondary product points
03

Build a three-part message

Every email runs to three sentences: what is happening in the buyer's business, what your company does about that change, and a question asking for a short call.

  • Account event and consequence
  • Offer connection
  • Simple invitation
04

Test the message cold

A colleague who has seen no research reads the email cold. The company, the buyer, the change and what your business offers should all be clear from the email by itself.

  • Remove vague pronouns
  • Remove compliments
  • Read the message aloud

Before Hyper approaches anyone

01

The opening survives without merge fields

Company context rather than the recipient token creates relevance.

02

Every claim has a source

The account brief supports the event and the message avoids private or guessed information.

03

The invitation matches the trust earned

A first email asks for a small conversation, not a large commitment.

Buyer questions

Answers for the decision in front of you.

How personalised should a cold email be?

Personalise the commercial connection. One supported account insight carries more value than several decorative facts.

Should a cold email cite its sources?

The message should sound informed without becoming a research report. Retain the source in the campaign record and state only the conclusion the source supports.

How long should a personalised cold email be?

Use enough space to establish relevance, connect the offer and invite a sensible response. Remove every sentence without a distinct job.

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